my cousin’s birthday By Alyssa
On saturday I went to my cousin’s birthday. I went with my mum and dad to the birthday. I went to go get an ice cream but we had to go! I ran to the can and put my seat belt on. I went to pick up my Aunty for the birthday after that we got to the place where the birthday was. I went to hug my cousin so I ran to her and gave her a hug. I said to her Happy birthday she said thank you! I gave her a card with money in it. I said to her to open it and she said ok so she opened it and all the money fell out on the ground I said look there is some money she picked it up and she said thank you it was so fun.
Kia ora Alyssa
Wow I loved reading about what happened in your cousins birthday and it was funny how the money fell down. This reminded me when it was my birthday and people gave me cards with money. You can make your writing better by checking your spelling and you can add some photos or questions.
Have a nice day Bye